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Pure Empathy

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Maybe needs a mature censor on it? I'm not sure.
Another Hannibal charcoal. That show is beautiful.
Image size
2091x2669px 1.2 MB
Make
SONY
Model
DSC-W180
Shutter Speed
1/125 second
Aperture
F/3.1
Focal Length
6 mm
ISO Speed
100
Date Taken
Apr 23, 2013, 11:13:14 AM
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Very nice. However (I mean no disrespect) His face is off. It looks like you were trying to draw two different angles at the same time. From the left it looks like his head is turned slightly to the right, but I think you got lost somewhere around his nose, and the right side of his face looks like it's being seen from straight on. This distorts the head. It's really apparent as you get closer to the edge of the paper. I know I have issues drawing close to borders sometimes, so that might be your problem. The need to stretch the face to avoid dancing with the edge.

Like I said, I mean no disrespect. I've had to critique art while in collage and I guess it's just a habit. I know I personally like when people give me constructive criticism. It helps one grow as an artist :D

Other than that you did a really good job at creating his likeness. The red was a nice touch as well. I'm curious, did you use colored pencil or a red chalk for the blood?

Also to answer your question, I don't think it needs a censor. I've seen far worse that has been uncensored on DA.